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Annotated introduction to an argument

Introduction to argument

Annotated paragraph. Original text: Although the Supreme Court has ruled against prayer in public schools on First Amendment grounds, many people still feel that prayer should be allowed. Such people value prayer as a practice central to their faith and believe that prayer is a way for schools to reienforce moral principles. They also compellingly point out a paradox in the First Amendmen itself: at what point does the separation of church and state restrict the freedom of those who wish to practice their religion? What proponants of school prayer fail to realize, however, is that the Supreme Court's decision, although it was made on legal grounds, makes sense on a religious grounds as well. Prayer is too important to be trusted to our public schools. --Kevin Smith, student. Annotations: Next to "the Supreme Court has ruled against": "Writer is knowledgeable, provides background." Next to "Such people value prayer": "Writer presents one point of view." Next to "They also compellingly point out a paradox": "Writer shows that he is fair-minded." Next to "What proponents of school prayer fail to realize": "An opposing point of view." Next to "Prayer is too important to be trusted to our public schools": "Thesis."

Sample lines of argument: citizen journalism and the shift to online news

Citizen journalism and the shift to online news

Thesis: The shift from print to online news provides unprecedented opportunities for readers to become more engaged with the news, to hold journalists accountable, and to participate as producers, not simply as consumers.

Sample lines of argument: biotechnology in sports

Biotechnology in sports

Thesis: Athletes who use any type of biotechnology give themselves an unfair advantage and disrupt the sense of fair play, and they should be banned from competition.

Sample lines of argument: health care coverage for children

Health care coverage for children

Thesis: State governments should take the initiative in extending health care coverage to all children within the state.

Sample lines of argument: bridge design

Bridge design

Thesis: It is possible and desirable to design more elegant bridges that are safe and cost-effective.