EXERCISE 6.12

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12. Refer to the advice in “Use Parallel Structure” under “Structuring Effective Sentences,” and revise the following sentences to eliminate nonparallelism.

  1. The next two sections of the manual discuss how to analyze the data, the conclusions that can be drawn from your analysis, and how to decide what further steps are needed before establishing a journal list.

  2. In the box, we should include a copy of the documentation, the cables, and the docking station.