Look at the "Revision" panels. How does thinking about your writing as being "under construction" before and during the revision process affect or change your perception of revision? What other metaphors can you suggest for the revision process? Think of a piece of writing you have recently finished, and write a few sentences explaining how much work you still had to do when you began to revise.

Review the "Revision" panels and look at the "Editing" panel. What do these images suggest about the relationship between revising and editing? Explain how you know when your writing is ready for the editing stage.