The following essay was written for an English class. Note the use of outside sources and the documentation of them at the end.
Anna Puiia
What Is Hip?
(See “Critical Reading” in Chapter 1)
GUIDING QUESTION
What examples does Puiia give to show her definition of hip?
VOCABULARY
The following words are italicized in the essay: conspicuous, hodgepodge, conglomerate, dishevelment, aesthetic, amalgamated, apathy, nonchalance, ironic. If you do not know their meanings, look them up in a dictionary or online.
PAUSE: Can you tell who Puiia is describing?
1
You know who they are. You have seen their self-
PAUSE: Note the details Puiia gives.
2
What is a hipster, anyway? Hipsterism, in general, is an to-
PAUSE: How does Puiia move the reader from one paragraph to the next?
3
But hipsterism goes beyond just fashion. The hipster subculture is very much defined by its musical tastes as well. The music of the hipster subculture is not defined by one genre. Most of the genres popularly associated with hipsters are combinations of other styles, and sometimes carry funny names, like shoegaze — a style of music characterized by the artists’ use of effect pedals, which causes them to spend all of their live performances gazing at their feet (LaRose). Some hipsters prefer music of a moodier, folksier persuasion, while others prefer pure electronica and synthesizers. Some settle in between with bands that combine the simple, pretty melodies of folk with the intricate layering of electronica, creating an offbeat, experimental sound.
PAUSE: Do you agree with Haddow’s opinion?
4
The hipster subculture is one of the most commonly criticized groups in American youth culture. A simple Google search of the word hipster provides one with links to pages and articles like, “Hipster Subculture Ripe for Parody,” or “Why The Hipster Must Die.” Another link is to an article entitled “Hipster: The Dead End of Western Civilization.” This article by Douglas Haddow discusses hipsterism as the “dead end of western civilization” (Haddow), because he claims that the hipsters are no longer producing anything new. He attacks the recycled aesthetic and amalgamated music styles of the hipsters and points to the use of past trends in new ways as a lack of creativity. This lack of creativity is reflected, he says, in today’s youth culture “simply consuming cool, rather than creating it,” (Haddow) as though hipsters are not making the things they buy and wear and listen to cool, but are instead being told these things are cool, and then consuming them. This criticism is founded in most of the things that hipsterism, itself, is based in: a sense of apathy, a projected nonchalance about fashion, the idea of recycling the past.
5
I do not see hipsters as a dead end. I see them as making progress for the fashion world. Hipsters are taking the trends of the past and making them cool in a new way — giving them new life. They are taking the untrends of the past and making them cool for the first time. They are wearing the flaws of their predecessors on their sleeves, or in the soles of their run-
6
Now, as I get dressed in my skinny jeans and my oversized ugly sweater, sliding on some thrift store loafers, I, a hipster, am wondering what the hippest response to being called a “dead end” would be. Maybe it was writing this paper, but I think I put in too much effort. It has to seem as if I did not care. Maybe it would be to laugh at it. Maybe I could name my band that, someday, when I have a band. Or maybe I should just make a T-
For more on documenting sources using MLA style, see Chapter 14.
Works Cited
Haddow, Douglas. “Hipster: The Dead End of Western Civilization Adbusters Culturejammer Headquarters.” Adbusters Culturejammer Headquarters | Journal of the Mental Environment. 29 July 2008. Web 06 April 2011. <https://www.adbusters.org/magazine/79/hipster.html>.
LaRose, Philip. “Know Your Subgenres: Shoegazing.” The KEXP Blog. 26 April 2009. Web 09 April 2011. <http://blog.kexp.org/blog/2009/04/26/know-
Robie, Elizabeth. “Culture: Hipster Fashion: The Ultimate in Urban Cool.” InsideVandy. The Vanderbilt Hustler. 03 Jan. 2008. Web. 20 April 2011. <http://www.insidevandy.com/drupal/node/6260>.
(See “Writing Critically About Readings” in Chapter 1)