DOCUMENT ANALYSIS ACTIVITY: Revising for Conciseness and Simplicity

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DOCUMENT ANALYSIS ACTIVITY

Revising for Conciseness and Simplicity

The following passage is from a request for proposals published by the National Science Foundation. (Sentence numbers have been added here.) The questions below ask you to think about word choice (as discussed in "Choosing the Right Words and Phrases: Avoid Euphemisms").

This passage contains many prepositional phrases. Identify two of them. For each one, determine whether its use is justified or whether the sentence would be easier to understand if it were eliminated.

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Source: National Science Foundation, 2008: www.nsf.gov/pubs/policydocs/pappguide/nsf08_1/gpg_1.jsp#IA1.

Question 10.1

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Question 10.2

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