75.1 Section Title
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You must read each slide, and complete any questions on the slide, in sequence.
Exercise W4-1
Jargon, pretentious language, euphemisms, doublespeak
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Edit the following sentences to eliminate jargon, pretentious or flowery language, euphemisms, and doublespeak. You may need to make substantial changes in some sentences. Type your answers in the boxes below.
Click Submit after each question to see feedback and to record your answer. After you have finished every question, your answers will be submitted to your instructor’s gradebook. You may review your answers by returning to the exercise at any time. (An exercise reports to the gradebook only if your instructor has assigned it.)
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Suggested revision: When I was young, my family was poor.
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Suggested revision: This conference will help me serve my clients better.
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Suggested revision: The meteorologist warned the public about the possible dangers of the coming storm.
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Suggested revision: Government studies show a need for after-school programs.
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Suggested revision: Passengers should try to complete the customs declaration form before leaving the plane.