Subordination

If two ideas are not of equal importance, it’s often effective to express the major idea in an independent clause and place the minor ideas in subordinate clauses or phrases. Subordinate clauses, which cannot stand alone, typically begin with a subordinating conjunction or relative pronoun.

Subordinating conjunctions

Deciding which idea to emphasize is not a matter of right and wrong but is determined by the meaning you intend. Consider the two ideas about chemotherapy and its side effects.

Example sentence: Chemotherapy is effective in killing cancel cells. The side effects can be debilitating.

If your purpose is to stress the effectiveness rather than the side effects, subordinate the idea about the side effects.

Example sentence: Although the side effects can be debilitating, chemotherapy is effective in killing cancer cells.

To focus on the side effects, subordinate the idea about effectiveness.

Example sentence: While chemotherapy is effective in killing cancer cells, the side effects can be debilitating.

Style point: End emphasis

Exercises:

Identifying coordination

Identifying subordination

Identifying sentence emphasis 1

Identifying sentence emphasis 2

Combining choppy sentences

Using coordination and subordination 1

Using coordination and subordination 2

Using coordination and subordination 3