EMILY NUSSBAUM has written for numerous publications including The New York Times, Slate, and New York magazine, for which she worked as culture editor. Currently, she is the television critic for The New Yorker, in which this review originally appeared. Her initial fascination with analyzing and critiquing television programs sprang from an obsession with Buffy the Vampire Slayer. Her reviews and commentary have become influential particularly in discussions about the effects of technology and social media on television as a medium and on our viewing habits. As you read,
notice that Nussbaum begins with a little narrative about her job as a television reviewer. How does this story prepare you for what follows?
consider how effectively Nussbaum establishes her credibility as a reviewer. What in her evaluation helps demonstrate her expertise?
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F or critics, sorting through television pilots is an act of triage. Last year, when Game of Thrones landed on my desk, I skimmed two episodes and made a quick call: we’d have to let this one go. The HBO series, based on the best-
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It was the right decision, even if I made it for the wrong reason. Game of Thrones is an ideal show to binge-
The show is so graphic that it was parodied on Saturday Night Live, with a “behind-
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It’s true that Game of Thrones is unusually lurid, even within the arms race of pay cable: the show is so graphic that it was parodied on Saturday Night Live, with a “behind-
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The first season of Game of Thrones built up skillfully, sketching in ten episodes a conflict among the kingdoms of Westeros, each its own philosophical ecosystem. There were the Northern Starks, led by the gruffly ethical Ned Stark and his dignified wife, Catelyn, and their gruffly ethical and dignified children. There were the Southern Lannisters, a crowd of high-
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In the season’s penultimate episode, the show made a radical move: it killed off the protagonist. On a public stage, Ned Stark was beheaded, on the orders of the teen-
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Still, the most compelling plots remain those of the subalterns, who are forced to wield power from below. These characters range from heroic figures like the tomboy Arya Stark to villains like Littlefinger, but even the worst turn out to have psychic wounds that complicate their actions. If the show has a hero, it’s Tyrion (Dinklage), who is capable of cruelty but also possesses insight and empathy, concealed beneath a carapace of Wildean wit. So far, his strategic gifts have proved more effective than the torture-
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Then, of course, there are the whores. From the start, the show has featured copious helpings of pay-
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Viewed in another light, however, these sex scenes aren’t always so gratuitous. Like Mad Men, Game of Thrones is elementally concerned with the way that meaningful consent dissolves when female bodies are treated as currency. War means raping the enemy’s women; princesses go for a higher price, because their wombs are the coin of the realm, cementing strategic alliances. It helps that the narrative is equally fascinated by the ways in which women secure authority, and even pleasure, within these strictures, and that in the second season its bench of female characters has got even deeper — among them, a seafaring warrior princess, a butch knight, and Tyrion’s prostitute girlfriend.
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Game of Thrones is not coy about the way the engine of misogyny can grind the fingers of those who try to work it in their favor. An episode two weeks ago featured a sickening sequence in which King Joffrey ordered one prostitute — a character the audience had grown to care about — to rape another. The scenario . . . seemed designed not to turn viewers on but to confront them with the logical endgame of this pornographic system. . . .
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As with True Blood, the show’s most graphic elements — the cruel ones, the fantasy ones, and the cruel-
[REFLECT]
Make connections: Binge-
Binge-
Is being immersed in an imagined world a — or even the —main attraction of binge-
Nussbaum suggests that the kinds of imagined worlds viewers gravitate toward (at least at the time she was writing) portray “a closed, often violent hierarchical system” that shows “what it means to be excluded from power” (par. 3). Why do you imagine viewers might be enticed by this theme?
[ANALYZE]
Use the basic features.
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Reviews usually begin by providing basic information about the subject. For example, William Akana’s title identifies his subject by name, “Scott Pilgrim vs. the World: A Hell of a Ride.” The second paragraph also provides the kinds of information readers expect to learn from film reviews, such as the name of the director (and his or her well-
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Scott Pilgrim vs. the World, released in 2010 by Universal Studios, came into production as a comic book adaptation film under the direction of Edgar Wright (best known for the zombie movie masterpiece Shaun of the Dead). Scott Pilgrim (Michael Cera) is a twenty-
Because Akana knows that his audience, particularly his instructor, might not have heard of Scott Pilgrim vs. the World (a cult classic but not a box office hit), he opens the review with a brief anecdote. Recounting a personal experience in a review is an unusual move, but it allows Akana to take the same position vis-
Write a paragraph analyzing how Nussbaum identifies her subject in “The Aristocrats”:
Compare Nussbaum’s way of presenting the subject with Akana’s. For example, how does she use the series’ name and what kinds of information does she give her audience about it?
Why do you think Nussbaum, like Akana, begins with an anecdote? Notice that Akana uses the first-
A WELL-
Reviewers assert an overall judgment of the subject in a thesis statement that usually appears early in the review. Akana, for example, concludes his opening paragraph with this thesis statement:
Evaluation
Genre
From start to finish, Scott Pilgrim vs. the World delivers intense action in a hilarious slacker movie that also somehow reimagines romantic comedy.
Notice that Akana praises the film here, making his overall judgment clear. (Of course, an evaluation doesn’t have to be all positive or all negative; reviews are often mixed.) He also uses specific evaluative language: He doesn’t claim simply that Scott Pilgrim is good. Instead, he points out what is good about the film based on the three genres it draws upon (action, slacker, and romantic comedy) and the criteria usually used for evaluating those film genres. And he supports his judgment with evaluative analysis, explaining what is noteworthy about the climactic fight scene:
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This brilliantly executed scene illustrates the artful cinematography of Scott Pilgrim vs. the World. More importantly, it delivers the film’s thematic message, which undercuts the cliché “love conquers all” and instead focuses on the fresh concept that, in the grand scheme of things, the only person you are fighting for is yourself. (par. 9)
Write a paragraph or two analyzing how Nussbaum presents and supports her judgment of Game of Thrones in “The Aristocrats”:
Skim the essay to find the thesis statement in which Nussbaum asserts her overall judgment, and highlight the evaluative language she uses.
What genre or combination of genres does Nussbaum use to categorize Game of Thrones? Consider whether Nussbaum’s evaluative language is typical of the criteria usually used when evaluating the genre (or genres) she identifies.
Now reread paragraph 4, 5, or 6 and analyze Nussbaum’s use of examples to support her judgment. How does she present an example or examples and use evaluative language?
AN EFFECTIVE RESPONSE TO OBJECTIONS AND ALTERNATIVE JUDGMENTS: CONCEDING AND REFUTING ALTERNATIVE JUDGMENTS
Reviewers often acknowledge an alternative judgment and then either refute or concede it. To do so, they may use a sentence strategy like one of these:
Programs in this genre have been dismissed as _____. But this misses the point because _____.
Some reviewers criticize the film because it _____. However, I think because _____.
EXAMPLE | Some reviewers have criticized the film because they think that in the end it fails as a romantic comedy. . . . |
Write a paragraph or two considering the role of the initial negative evaluations of Game of Thrones in “The Aristocrats”:
Reread paragraphs 2–3, noting the negative evaluations and Nussbaum’s response. Does she refute, concede, or make the refutation-
Now look at paragraphs 7–10, where Nussbaum returns to the criticism of sex in Game of Thrones. How does she respond to the criticism this time? What point is she making about “the logical endgame of this pornographic system” (par. 9)?
What’s implied by the phrase “graphic arts” in the subtitle: “The Graphic Arts of Game of Thrones”?
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A CLEAR, LOGICAL ORGANIZATION: CUEING READERS
Nussbaum’s evaluation is complicated. She interweaves plot summary with analysis to support her claims about the merits (and demerits) of Game of Thrones, and she compares the series with other cable series, both good and bad. To keep her readers on track, she must use a variety of cueing strategies.
Write a paragraph analyzing how Nussbaum helps her audience follow her evaluation in “The Aristocrats”:
Skim the essay, noting Nussbaum’s main topics and marking any key terms that she uses to orient readers.
Mark any transitions, considering how each transition helps readers follow the logical movement from topic to topic.
Consider how effective Nussbaum’s strategies are. How difficult did you find it to follow the logic of the review? What would you suggest Nussbaum do, if anything, to make her evaluation easier to follow?
[RESPOND]
Consider possible topics: Offering a mixed judgment.
Some of the most effective and interesting evaluations are neither wholly positive or negative. Instead, they point out both strengths and weaknesses while developing a clear overall judgment. Try to think of a subject about which you have mixed feelings — such as a sports team, video game, film, musical performance, or course you’ve taken. What is your overall judgment? What would you praise about your subject and what would you criticize? What are the criteria you think should be used in evaluating examples of this genre?