SSentence Style
S1 | Parallelism |
a | With items in a series |
b | With paired ideas |
c | Repeated words |
S2 | Needed words |
a | In compound structures |
b | that |
c | In comparisons |
d | a, an, and the |
S3 | Problems with modifiers |
a | Limiting modifiers such as only, even |
b | Misplaced phrases and clauses |
c | Awkwardly placed modifiers |
d | Split infinitives |
e | Dangling modifiers |
S4 | Shifts |
a | Point of view |
b | Verb tense |
c | Verb mood and voice |
d | Indirect to direct questions or quotations |
S5 | Mixed constructions |
a | Mixed grammar |
b | Illogical connections |
c | is when, is where, reason . . . is because |
S6 | Sentence emphasis |
a | Coordination and subordination |
b | Choppy sentences |
c | Ineffective coordination |
d | Ineffective subordination |
e | Excessive subordination |
f | Special techniques |
S7 | Sentence variety |
a | Sentence openings |
b | Sentence structures |
c | Inverted order |
d | Question or quotation |